To Adverb or Not – That is the Question

Writing 101, Day Eight: Death to Adverbs

How does one write without adverbs? Not sure but that’s the test. Let’s have at it! (I’m not even sure I know what an adverb is…)

The afternoon was long with nothing but emails, a prospectus and Dr. Phil to fill it. The temperature was a warm 78 degrees with  welcomed ocean breezes coming through the windows. I had stuff to do before my dinner appointment, but the weather made me lazy. And apathetic.

I wanted to play, have fun, visit a friend, dance in the sprinkler. My responsible Virgo side snuffed that, reminding me that once what had to get done was completed – I could enjoy my evening. It is the way my mind works.

The flowers were calling – their colors bright and loud. Come outside, hang with us, maybe water us? “No,” I answered. “Not now. Stop it!” Am I the only one that talks to flowers?

Emails sorted, Dr. Phil watched, prospectus getting there. Off to meet my friend for dinner. I have decided in this time period (assuming I haven’t used adverbs – please advise if otherwise) that I like them and prefer them in my writing. Long live adverbs! (I may have found my future cause.)

 

 

 

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About wendykarasin

I am complicated and seeking - joy and sorrow, country and city, competition and cooperation. After behavior of a gregarious nature, I require down time to refuel. My loves are children, family, friends, reading, writing, blogging, fitness, and health. I feel most alive when I stay true to my core values. Beauty makes me happy, pain helps me grow.
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5 Responses to To Adverb or Not – That is the Question

  1. As with many things concerned with writing, adverbs should be used judiciously. A few aren’t bad, as long as you’re not tripping over them. Hmmmm….I think that’s a mixed metaphor…..

  2. Gail N-K says:

    Not an adverb in sight! Love it!

  3. Being Adverb-less didn’t seem to affect you adversely. In fact I think it gave you an advantage. I wonder what an advanced adverb advocator’s advice might be? What an Adventure!

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